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“People generally cheer on each other to the finish, tell them to keep going,” said 9th-grade boys cross country runner Jackson Southern about the positive chemistry within the boys and girls cross country team this fall. The
The boys’ team, led by seniors Michael Sefick, Richard Danylo, and Brandan Wetherall, earned a section championship. Southern suggests this is also a result of “generally kind, good group of people. We all work hard through difficult practices running Buckingham drive in Cobblestone and Josephs Lane.”
Southern suggests this is also a result of “generally kind, good group of people. We all work hard through difficult practices running Buckingham drive in Cobblestone and Josephs Lane.”
Girls cross country also competed well throughout the season, with highlights from junior Emily Tyler and sophomore Anna Igims.
The article is well-written, but it is missing many aspects. I believe more interviews would have made it better. Additionally, an introductory paragraph instead of going directly to the quote would make a little bit more sense. Also, one paragraph is repeated twice.